Trailer Rough Cut and Feedback

Our first Rougb Cut followed a chronological order which after showing it to our audience for the first time, we found and decided is wasn't fitting into the normal conventions of a horror trailer and wasn't realistic. This was feedback that we had come up with within are group to work on.
We received a few bits of feedback from our audience, one being that our Chief of police scene ran far too long and they suggested we should cut it up into sections and spread it out throughout the trailer. Another suggested perhaps putting part of the Chief of Police scene at the end of the trailer to mix up the order a bit. Our group thoroughly agreed with this feedback, finding that it not only gave more depth and a better pace to our trailer but it would also foreshadow what our character's where going to go through. Some other feedback pointed out we had a few scenes that were boring and were focused on adding too much information for a trailer and that should be removed. Trailer's are suppose to withhold some information to pull in an audience so we agreed with this.
All the feedback we received was really useful and we will take it on board as we continue to work on our trailer to the highest quality we can.